Willow Dean ([info]drusillas_rain) wrote,
2005-05-22 17:53:00
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Lamentation (13)

Title: Lamentation
Author: [info]drusillas_rain aka Willow Dean
Challenge: written for [info]jamie2109’s ADWT challenge
Prompt: “A door opened behind him/her.”
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 518
Pairing: Hermione Granger/Ron Weasley
Kink/Squick: Necrophilia
Warning: Character Death
Disclaimer: JKR’s characters are not mine
A/N: I really should be finishing my fic for the upcoming [info]harry_submits challenge. Instead this happened. Also, I highly recommend the movie Kissed.
Summary: War means there are no perfect moments.
Cross-posted: [info]hp_kink, [info]hp_squick, [info]weasleyworship and [info]hpangst



PLEASE READ THE WARNING ABOVE


She pushed open the door and lit all the torches with a wave of her wand. There, in the centre of the small room, was a body covered in a white sheet.

The battle had been fierce and chaotic, and Hermione had ducked curses and screamed hexes of her own. The trio had been separated almost from the beginning and now as the skirmish had begun to wind down, she searched for Ron and Harry. Suddenly, Bellatrix caught her eye, and she sprinted amidst the bodies, only to arrive too late.

“Avada Kedavra.”

Just like that, he fell.

Hermione quickly retaliated with a curse of her own, her grief and anger enough to fuel the Crucio. Aurors arrived, and she released the Lestrange bitch, pausing only long enough to spit on her still twitching body.

She sank to her knees and pulled the red-haired boy into her lap. Now he was on a cold slab, waiting to be buried.

They would never have their happily ever after. Never rent a flat with Harry in London. Or buy a house of their own.

Hurried kisses in the trenches would never be replaced with leisurely ones on a warm Sunday afternoon with the telly on and Crookshanks stretched across their lap. And she would never know what it would feel like to have Ron’s weight pressing against her.

She pulled back the sheet as tears came to her eyes again. He still looked so much like the boy who used to drive her mad, always telling her to lighten up and not study so much.

She undressed in silence, and tried to stop her tears.

They had shared a tent for only a few weeks, and never ventured past the occasional stolen moment. She cursed herself for wanting everything to be perfect for their first time. What was wrong with her, she thought over and over again. There was a war on, and it didn’t allow for perfect moments.

She undid Ron’s robe, unbuttoned his shirt, undid his trousers. His cock was soft and she whispered words she had encountered in a dusty tome that hardened it. Climbing onto the table, she straddled his body and impaled herself. Her tears came again, and she wailed as she fucked her lover for the first time.

She moved faster and faster and closed her eyes, letting her mind think that Ron was only being passive as a game. Ron was alive and she was fucking him, making love to him, and it was their perfect moment.

Hermione rubbed her clit, not wanting the moment to end, not wanting to think about what she was doing, what she would never do, what would end too soon and not soon enough.

Breathing heavily, she was still crying when the door opened behind her. She got up off the table, and put her clothing back on as the intruder closed the door and walked into the room. The figure pulled out his wand and dressed Ron again, straightening the robes and pulling back the sheet. Harry embraced Hermione as she collapsed onto the floor, crying.

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  • 41 comments

[info]jamie2109

May 22 2005, 15:37:09 UTC 7 years ago

Oh how terribly sad!! Necro is a squick of mine actually, but this was very well done, so that I wasn't squicked at all. I just felt overwhelming sadness for Hermione.

[info]drusillas_rain

May 22 2005, 15:40:15 UTC 7 years ago

heh - thx. I actually wasn't sure if I should post this or not. It just kind of came to me this morning and wouldn't go away...

[info]potthead

May 22 2005, 15:54:54 UTC 7 years ago

Wow... necro's supposed to be squicky, but I was so busy being sad I was hardly squicked! R/Hr! T___T;; It's going to be SO sad if one fo the trio dies! *runs off crying*

Wonderful job with this, though. <3

[info]drusillas_rain

May 22 2005, 21:52:26 UTC 7 years ago

thanks for the review :D I realized the other day that not much squicks me anymore, so I guess it was my turn to start writing it.

[info]potthead

7 years ago

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[info]kitsune

May 22 2005, 15:54:56 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you for a beautiful fic.

And thanks for mentioning Kissed, such a great and underrated film.

[info]drusillas_rain

May 22 2005, 21:53:20 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you!

It's been a long time since I've seen it, but it definitely changed my opinion of necro.

[info]paradise4writin

May 29 2005, 14:05:34 UTC 6 years ago

That was a beautiful fic

[info]drusillas_rain

May 29 2005, 15:43:26 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks you so much!

[info]midnightmagics

May 29 2005, 17:53:33 UTC 6 years ago

Wow, that was so sad. I hardly noticed the necro, I was to busy feeling sorry for Hermione.

Great job.

[info]drusillas_rain

May 29 2005, 18:28:06 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you!

[info]stormsandsins

May 29 2005, 19:13:47 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, this was so sad, and so wrong, but so beautifully well done. I mean, really, necro's really squicky but you made it work at least this once :)

[info]drusillas_rain

May 30 2005, 19:51:28 UTC 6 years ago

thanks so much! The plot bunny wouldn't leave me alone and I didn't know whether to cry or be grossed out while writing it

[info]stormsandsins

6 years ago

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[info]mschneider

May 29 2005, 20:42:31 UTC 6 years ago

Oh. Wow. Okay, so... most times the whole.. necrophilia part would've freaked me out but... it was so SAD for Hermione... the whole... filled with grief thing... that you pulled it off without the squick factor of it all. Anyway, that was great... Enjoyed reading it.

[info]drusillas_rain

May 30 2005, 19:51:46 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you! I was hoping that's how it would come across

[info]nocturnali

May 30 2005, 04:28:50 UTC 6 years ago

Sad, but um... sorry.

Thank you.

[info]drusillas_rain

May 30 2005, 19:51:59 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks for the review

[info]kinky_kneazle

May 30 2005, 06:07:45 UTC 6 years ago

I almost didn't read it, but I'm glad I did. Poor Hermione. It was beautiful.

[info]drusillas_rain

May 30 2005, 19:52:11 UTC 6 years ago

I'm glad you did too :) Thank you!

[info]lusiology

May 30 2005, 11:48:24 UTC 6 years ago

Hurried kisses in the trenches would never be replaced with leisurely ones on a warm Sunday afternoon with the telly on and Crookshanks stretched across their lap

For some reason this line in particular sums up (for me) the tragedy of Hermione's loss. *sobs*

[info]drusillas_rain

May 30 2005, 20:03:50 UTC 6 years ago

thank you so much! I don't think anyone's ever quoted one of my lines before, so am very flattered.

[info]lusiology

6 years ago

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[info]drusillas_rain

6 years ago

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[info]guest_age

May 30 2005, 17:13:24 UTC 6 years ago

Good God, woman. How on earth do you do it? I am sitting here crying my eyes out when technically I should be grossed out, but I'm not, because I feel so sorry for her. It's so heartbreaking.

On another note, I saw that it said "necrophillia," but for some reason, it didn't register in my mind what that meant. I KNOW what it means, but for some reason, I thought it meant something else. I'm glad I thought it was the other thing, because if I knew what it was, I wouldn't have read it, but I'm glad I did. *cries*

POOR HERMIONE!!!!

[info]drusillas_rain

May 30 2005, 19:53:47 UTC 6 years ago

*blushes* thank you so much!

(I'm trying to think of some other way to show my gratitude for your very cool review, but somehow 'I'm glad I made you cry' just sounds wrong)

[info]guest_age

6 years ago

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[info]drusillas_rain

6 years ago

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[info]guest_age

6 years ago

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[info]smirk_dog

July 16 2005, 19:10:56 UTC 6 years ago

:(

::feels too sad to be all squicked out::

[info]drusillas_rain

July 17 2005, 09:42:26 UTC 6 years ago

*hugs*
thanks for the review

[info]hellfaucet

September 28 2005, 13:11:07 UTC 6 years ago

THIS IS SO FUCKED.

[info]drusillas_rain

October 9 2005, 18:43:47 UTC 6 years ago

Thx for the review

[info]magical_maladie

October 19 2005, 09:42:09 UTC 6 years ago

*sob*

[info]drusillas_rain

October 19 2005, 13:33:41 UTC 6 years ago

*passes tissue*

[info]luthor_files

May 16 2006, 23:51:24 UTC 6 years ago

I don't fancy necro, but I'm awfully glad I gave this story a shot. It's so sad and beautiful, I just wish it was longer. Hermione's sadness was so clear and intense.


They would never have their happily ever after. Never rent a flat with Harry in London. Or buy a house of their own.

That almost had me crying :~

Very good job ;)

[info]drusillas_rain

May 17 2006, 06:27:48 UTC 6 years ago

thank you so much!

[info]isildurs_babe

November 23 2006, 17:20:15 UTC 5 years ago

Wow... its all I can say. *waits five minutes and re-reads*

a lovely story, beautifully poignant and wonderfully written. I can't describe how much i admire you for this, not only is it a taboo subject-matter that squicks alot of readers but you've dealt with it in a heartfelt way thats really interesting. The extreme of a lifeless Ron compared to all the tears and emotion of Hermione. i'll end how I started, wow.

[info]drusillas_rain

November 23 2006, 17:54:56 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks for the lovely comments! And, I love your icon ^_^

[info]mollyssister

October 29 2008, 03:41:05 UTC 3 years ago

I found this on [info]painless_j's rec list. It is quite powerful and hot at the same time. Thank you

[info]drusillas_rain

October 29 2008, 14:52:34 UTC 3 years ago

thanks so much for commenting - I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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